Logan Castle Ch. 7The next morning Rebecca woke up to the feeling of Brian running one large finger over her back, “Are you deliberately trying to wake me up?” she asked.
Well, I don't know how to begin. It feels like all I want to put in this critique is "aww" one hundred times and submit it, but that wouldn't work out, would it?
Well, I love how the story is developing so far, especially now that Brian knows his secret, I assume their relationship will sail smoothly, I hope.
So now we're also introduced to her family, which from the looks of it, appears to be a rather close-knit family, which I assume is because of the small number of dragons left in the community, which makes it necesary for them to stick together.
So now everything worked out as planned, and I wonder what Chapter 8 will look like.
And they way Johnny said "St George is a rat" was pretty clever.
Though, I noticed you misspelled Brian's name several times, but since you're going through a lot I'll let is slip. I mean, you're having a rough time right now, yet you actually found time to complete the story. I'm impressed.
Thanks, I’ve always hated that the most well known stories about dragons are ones where they end up dead, so I couldn’t resist throwing the comment about George the rat in there.
Thank you for pointing out the miss spelling of Brian’s name, I can’t believe how many times I did that, I’ve fixed it now.
With being sick finding time to work on the story is the easy part and probably better for my health. I spent most of yesterday arguing with myself about whether I should be packing so I can go help my aunt or if I should have been resting so I might get over being sick faster. In the end I spent most of the day packing and once I started to feel run down I had to force myself to sit down and work on the story because it was the only thing that could get me to stop packing. Today I’m wishing I had stopped to work on the story sooner because I did more packing than I should have yesterday and feel sicker today, which is driving me crazy, I have to be healthy and be done packing before I can go help my aunt and I can’t accomplish both at the same time.